Puriv'r and Speriv'r

Thought I'd have a go at a design for Speriv'r, I've been meaning to draw him for a while. There's something really off about his face, but I can't put my finger on what it is, so I can't do much about that. 

Anyway, he's got a pretty normal Tamaranian outfit. Most of the males seem to be wearing black boots in Betrothed, so I gave him the same. He has the standard green eyes and I chose to give him brown hair. His jewels are green too, but diamond shaped, as a few of the other males have them like this too. Overall I think he turned out well. Here's some of his info.

Code Name: Rapid River

Real Name: Speriv'r

Age: 19

Species: Tamaranian

Place of Origin: Tamaran

Residence: Tamaran

Gender: Male

Birthday: June 11th

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

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Hair Color: Brown

Eye Color: Green

Height: 5'11

Body Type: Lean, toned

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Father: Abyriv'r (Deep River) - Deceased

Mother: Eleriv'r (Blue River)

Siblings: Puriv'r (White River)

Love Interest: (Still thinking of a name!)

Team/Partner: Tamaranian Warriors

Affliction: Warrior

Affiliation(s):

Powers Received By: Born with them.

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Past/Bio: Having always been much smaller and thinner than other male Tamaranians of his age, Speriv'r had always been considered the runt of the litter. He was teased by his peers and became increasingly withdrawn from anyone outside his family.

However, following the sad loss of his father, Speriv'r forced himself to put aside his fears and stepped up to take his father's place as a Tamaranian Warrior. Training was difficult and took a great deal of his time and energy. Not quite as strong as his fellow Warriors, he had to work that much harder to keep up with the others. But his size enabled him to move at a greater speed and he used this to his advantage. After much hard work, Speriv'r finally earned the respect of the other Warriors and over time became an indispensable member of the Tamaranian army.

During a rare time of peace on Tamaran, Speriv'r accompanied his younger sister Puriv'r when she began travelling the galaxy. The two discovered many places and made many friends, but while his sister yearned to discover more, Speriv'r found he missed his mother and their home planet. So with a promise to see her again soon, he left his sister and returned home.

Speriv'r spends his days training as much as possible, while still finding time to spend with his newfound love...

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Personality: Intelligent, brave, determined.

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Powers: Super-strength, flight.

Other Abilities: Language Assimilation.

Weapons: N/A